KWO to Starfish Essay & More Banned Word Revisions (Class 5)

KWO to Starfish Essay & More Banned Word Revisions (due  9-24-22)

Use your HANDWRITTEN KWO from class to write your Starfish Essay.

Banned word sentences.

Find the banned words &
write a better sentence w/o the banned word.

Under the revised BANNED WORD sentences, write your STARFISH essay using

the KWO you created in class.

There should be NO banned words in your STARFISH essay.

Insert a picture of your KWO into the homework doc @ the bottom.

Write your essay in your OMICRON class doc first.

Copy and paste it into the HOMEWORK doc.

Starfish Source Text (For teachers only)

Starfish live in all the worldʼs oceans. There are over 2,000 kinds of starfish. They eat oysters and clams. Most starfish have five arms, but some have ten, twenty, or even forty arms. If a starfish loses an arm, it can grow another one. Some starfish can even grow a body from just an arm. They can do this because they have their important organs in their arms instead of in their body. Starfish are not really fish, so scientists encourage people to call them Sea Stars.

NAME:
DUE: 9-24-21

1) She went to the dance class to give lessons to the youngsters.

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2) The teacher asked me to come to class earlier.

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3) Finishing her supper, the little old woman asked to give her speech.

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4) Turning the corner, the policeman saw the criminal go into the warehouse.

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5) The bank manager said that the fire drill would be at 3:00.

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6) Toby goes to Yale and gets good grades.

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7) Edit your writing homework because it is going to be the most important step to getting a great grade.

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8) Mariposa is how you say butterfly in Spanish.

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9) Giving Christmas presents is my favorite part of the office party.

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10) Winter came too fast this year.

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Source Text to KWO

KWO to Essay