Thursday, September 16, 2021

Banned Words and Sentence Fragments (Class 4)

OMICRON Homework: Correct the Banned Words and Fragments  Due 9-17-22

PART ONE: Write a new and better sentence for each sentence containing banned words.

PART TWO: Identify and correct the incomplete sentences (fragments)

NAME:

DUE: 9-17-21


  1. My favorite ice cream company went out of business.

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. She is going to Princeton in the fall and is getting very excited about starting.

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. Let the girl go to the park with her dog because it is the day of the dog parade.

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. Getting up at 5am is a wonderful way to have time to go to the gym before school.

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. She eats her noodles noisily!

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. My brother gets good grades. and I get good grades, too!

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. Turn on the radio because the storm is getting bad and we need to get the weather.

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. Sugar coated cereal is bad to eat for breakfast.

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. I like to play outside, but Ineed to get into an air conditioned room by the end of the day.

REVISED SENTENCE


  1. My car is giving me trouble and I have to take it to the mechanic.

REVISED SENTENCE


If the sentence is a fragment (incomplete sentence), correct it by making it a complete sentence. You can add words to the beginning or end of the fragment.


If the sentence is a complete sentence, do nothing to it.


  1. I am the head cheerleader.


  1. Because she enjoys swimming.


  1. My boyfriend is the basketball captain.


  1. For no good reason.


  1. Wandering through the museum was an adventure.


  1. Which offered us not explanation.


  1. He wept.


  1. Safety in numbers.


  1. Exposure to radiation is dangerous.


  1. With the students.

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