Friday OMICRON Writers Mark Homework DUE: 8-27-21
Find the banned words.
Rewrite each sentence without the banned words, and BE SURE to make the sentence better.
1. Toby saw the deer, aimed his camera, and hoped he would get a great shot.
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2. Under the umbrella it got very crowded when all of Jinny's friends tried to get out of the rain.
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3. He looked thirsty so I gave him some water.
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4. My neighbor said that there had been a raccoon eating out of her trashcan the night before.
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5. Our favorite store was going out of business because sales had gone down drastically during COVID.
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6. His sister went to my school and I never knew it.
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7. After finalizing the dates for the swim meet we gave the information to the newspaper.
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8. Why did she go to the mall when she could have gone to the resale shop?
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9. It is wonderful to come home to a home cooked meal.
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10. Darla said that Megan went to get a big pizza.
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11. Her dress was pretty until she fell into the mud puddle.
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12. My dog is bigger than your dog, so they will never both fit into the car with us.
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13. Whoever said that we should invite then to come visit was crazy!
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14. I hope Santa when comes to my house he does not get stuck in the chimney!
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15. My Mom told me to eat my vegetables or I would not get dessert.
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16. It is good to finish homework before going out to hang with friends.
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17. It was nice of the driver to slow down in order to avoid hitting the dog.
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18. My brother came home with a black eye and got into so much trouble!
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19. The teacher gave him an award for perfect attendance.
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20. I saw the cat stalk the unsuspecting bird, so I got a horn and blew it to scare the bird away.
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21. We invited them to come eat with us on Thursday.
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22. There is a pretty good chance that it will rain, so I got my big umbrella.
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23. Tacos are my favorite thing to eat for dinner.
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24. Ancient scrolls are looked at with extra care.
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25. Cars go too fast on the school road, and something should be done to stop it!
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